Conrad Rice

Two parter. Hope you don't mind it. Tear it up please. :)

Here's my critique, nice and prompt as always. :) I have to thank you again for helping me with my story. I can only hope that the help I am ...

Well, all in all I found this story to be a very tightly knit together piece. You allowed us to get into Riley's head very well, helping us to identify ...

Blinded By the Light- Manfred Mann's Earth Band

Suddenly I See- K.T. Tunstall

Here's my review for your story. I swear, Ky, you're going to have to start messing up again. You do many more good chapters like this and I'll be out ...

Here's my review, Kylan, faithful as always. I have to give you major kudos for carrying on a story like this. It is incredibly risky, but never once have you ...

Here's my review. Sorry it's so late. By the way, I mentioned that I would take a review of a story in return for my help. I've posted it up ...

Sam put his pants back on and stumbled to his feet. Muir had already closed her eyes and fallen asleep, for all of the world to see. Sam reached down ...

Sam pedaled his bike down the street, in a hurry to get a good distance from his house. The evening air rushed past him, chilling him beneath his black jacket. ...

It's adult fiction. I'd say it's a sort of space opera, though the characters don't really go to many planets. It's about the first dolphin-commanded starship in a universe where ...

David Brin's Startide Rising is a good read. I enjoyed it.

6/10

Hey, got my critique done today! Sorry, it's kind of a little short. And a little mean too. I must say though, this story is turning out to be even ...

Well, this was a nice little piece. I liked Leila, though she seemed a bit uncomfortable at first, after it became apparent she was an immigrant it felt essential to ...